untitled - 10/25/24

do you remember me?

               when you feel the sun, when the warmth hugs your face,

       do you remember what you sang to me?

the song you wrote, you said my voice was     like a hug,                        almost like the sun,       

               almost like love, 

 said the song you wrote, with too many commas and too many words,

 not enough rhythm and

     not enough rhyme, too much love, the song you wrote.